Cat/dog Photo colages

 

                                                today we made Animal photo colleges                                                                                                              they were really cool. (i didn't have a photo of my art so thanks james(: )

Cyclone Bola book cover

in our class we voted a book to read and we all voted Cyclone Bola i have learnt lots about Cyclones  

I would change nothing because i kind of like it

 I enjoyed making the book cover.

The 3 sacraments of Initiation rap

 

                                              Today i was learning how to make a rap about the Three Sacraments

                                               of ination 

                                                I enjoyed finding words to use in our rap.

                                                I found it hard to write  the script

We cannot take our lives for granted

Do you think we take our lives for granted? I think we do because we live in a safe country with No war and here in New Zealand we live fortunate lives which means we often take our lives for granted. Our lives can change in a matter of seconds. Which we have all experienced this year due to covid.

 Firstly,  if you didn’t know what it means to take our lives for granted I am talking about the fact that we have access to clean drinking water and fresh food.We all know that covid 19 is a horrible virus and it has affected millions of families around the world. On the plus side due to people being in lock down and living differently the environment in many places has had an opportunity to rejuvenate itself, for example, It has cleaned up the dirty waters in Venice, canals in italy. However if we don't make lasting changes this will quickly return to normal and the earth we live on will continue to get more and more polluted. Let's not take the earth we live on for granted. 

Many of us may take our lives for granted lIke I said here in New Zealand we live in a safe country and we can walk home because we don't really have harmful people around. One of the things I like about New Zealand is we don't have war unlike in some other countries like Iran, Israel, and the United State. Iran is at war because Iran repeated the human rights abuse since the Islamic Revolution.

Secondly, I urge you to believe that sometimes not only do we take the life of our planet for granted, we may also take our own lives for granted  and we don't even know it. Sometimes I feel like I've taken my own life for granted but I didn't actually realise until now because I researched it and I found it very interesting.

. Lastly, I would like to talk about having a loving family. My loving family provides me  a bed, food, water, and especially love, kindness,all of those things that I need. 

 In Conclusion there is no question that we take our lives for granted because we live in a safe country, life is the most special gift of all that God has gifted us with. Hopefully I have convinced you to not take your life for granted.

 

 

Success Criteria:	Self Assessment😀😀😀😀
I have used my first technique to enhance my writing	😀😀😀
I have used my second technique to enhance my writing	😀😀😀
I have used my third technique to enhance my writing	😀😀😀😀
Use at least three different (FEARRR) persuasive techniques in your writing.	😀😀😀😀

Active Reflection:	My Reflection
What have I done well?	I have 1.used my Punctuation correctly  2.used good words
Next step:	I have to 1.to use more facts

FEARRR: rhetorical questions  Addressed  the audience  facts and opinions   

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